Your moodboard has some brief analysis showing us some of the main ideas we can draw from seeing several magazines all together. Can you add more to this?
Your magazine cover analysis is still really only telling me what the main conventions are. By this stage I would like to know more about the differences between the covers. How do the colours affect the mood of each magazine? Are they classy or cheap looking? Why? Tell me anything you know or can find out about the celebrities who are on the covers. Does it make a difference who is on the cover of an magazine like this and why?
You target audience profile is okay and takes a typical individual giving me a little bit of detail about her. Improve your grade on this one by adding other media products she might like - like music, films or TV programmes. Also, where does she shop for fashion - Primark? or Louis Vuitton?
Your moodboard has some brief analysis showing us some of the main ideas we can draw from seeing several magazines all together. Can you add more to this?
ReplyDeleteYour magazine cover analysis is still really only telling me what the main conventions are. By this stage I would like to know more about the differences between the covers. How do the colours affect the mood of each magazine? Are they classy or cheap looking? Why? Tell me anything you know or can find out about the celebrities who are on the covers. Does it make a difference who is on the cover of an magazine like this and why?
You target audience profile is okay and takes a typical individual giving me a little bit of detail about her. Improve your grade on this one by adding other media products she might like - like music, films or TV programmes. Also, where does she shop for fashion - Primark? or Louis Vuitton?
By the way - why does the title page have 'TV Listings' on it?
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