Good design - some great photography and the way you have set the figures against the background is good - as is the lighting on them. The conventions of the magazine are done well. At the moment the shape of the page is wrong. It would be a good idea to bring your pictures at the bottom up to where the model's feet are. You could reduce them in size to do this and put the cover lines on top of the pictures. Ask me to help you with this.
Good design - some great photography and the way you have set the figures against the background is good - as is the lighting on them. The conventions of the magazine are done well. At the moment the shape of the page is wrong. It would be a good idea to bring your pictures at the bottom up to where the model's feet are. You could reduce them in size to do this and put the cover lines on top of the pictures. Ask me to help you with this.
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